I think it's fair to say by all standards it's awful.

This type of thinking sends clothing off down the dead end street of post-modernist context over content. I don't need to know the back story, or what i'm meant to be thinking. I don't mean by you but i mean by the wearer. Ultimately people can wear what they want. But i don't think we are testing anything here. And in a couple of months it'll soon mean nothing. Truth is constant. And truth is balance. Anything unbalanced no matter how good the back story will never be an improvement or maintain. That's just my view though.

Balance doesn't have to mean mundane or plain though. It is a really obvious contrast, and pretty poorly done. Again, imo